sin

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Tuesday, 29-Dec-2009 4:14:12

This act you've done, was it worth it?
Worth that one moment of bliss, and false happiness?
Was that moment you chose to ignore my pry worth the guilt that you're feeling inside? I tried.
This road you're on, it's worthless!
Cursed with a million hints at unGodliness.
Yet the moment you choose to pretend you don't care is more tempting than what you can bare. I've been there.
And I'm telling you, it's to no purpose.
Without Me, you'll never resurface.
So the moment you choose to extend your goodbye to this slavery to self, you'll die, and You're mine.

Post 2 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Tuesday, 29-Dec-2009 17:43:53

Wow rightous man LOL I like it though

Post 3 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Tuesday, 29-Dec-2009 20:04:26

I love the rhythm to this piece! I think this is the most unique rhythm I've seen here. Very well done!
I also feel the message being sent in this poem; it's very powerful. And good word choice.